I present to you the machinima “The Last Thing”. I would like you to appreciate our heavy labors and suggested shortcomings. So… here it is:
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P.S. If there are 10 positive reviews, the series will continue.
Then the fun jazz started and I didn’t understand what to expect next.
Like people usually have their name written on their money?
And finally the dialogues https://giantspinscasino.uk/ are limp.
They already said about the sound. Burr in the main role – in principle, I don’t care, AF voiced Greson and everyone liked it, but you have 2 other huge problems: zero voice acting and catastrophic sound quality.
Otherwise, there are quite a lot of chamber jambs, for example, when it makes a flyover and flies through the insides of a car or building, which is not cool. And one more thing – there are a lot of fans with music. Abrupt transitions between tracks, and sometimes there is no track at all.
AND IN MY MIND YOU TOOK THE MOMENT WITH THE SUICIDE FROM HOUSE.EVEN THE MUSIC WAS SELECTED THE SAME.Smart move.And it turned out spectacularly
Jack’s voice acting is top notch and his burr can be considered his trademark; other characters’ voice acting is a little lame. Everything was filmed ok, on 4). The jazz music was very pleasing, and it was inserted with skill, but nowhere. Well, the plot intrigued me. In general, I will wait for the continuation and hope that it will come out next month.
P.S.It seems to me that the main condition for detectives in America is that their name is Jack))) no, seriously, I personally don’t remember a detective whose name would be Bob, or Clark at the very least)).
In general, we need to choose better voices and work longer on the dialogues. Don’t make such sudden transitions in music (and why when he runs to the roof where this girl jumped from, funny music plays?) Yes, and the camera sometimes flies through hands, cars, etc.d. Overall quite good
Interesting idea and plot. +
Sound (Voice acting, abrupt pauses, music fading during conversations). — The operator does not focus on any situation, then in the scene with the car the camera is focused more on the wall, then at the end the camera is focused on the 5th floor. — It started, it turned out really well. +
Then there was the impression that you were too lazy to show great interest
project. — In general, machinima is at a good level, write further episodes, gain experience, and off you go. =)
scitels
I could try voice acting (if you invite me).
The dialogues are bad, there are no emotions – there is a solution (of course it’s boring, but still) to read some kind of detective story on this topic (there are probably a lot of them). And for those who filmed and edited in a game editor, I advise you to practice controlling the camera more (at some points the camera shakes from side to side).
Damn, I felt like an evil critic =)
although your post is reasonable
(A smart person is not offended by criticism, but draws conclusions.(Agatha Christie))
even as it is, it is already an order of magnitude higher than all Mashynim countries of the former USSR
Everything is ok, but sometimes there is a feeling that there is nothing but the voice, t.e. no background sound, no music in the background..
Find the right voices for the voice acting and it will be just great 😉
I don’t want to offend anyone, but the burr in the dubbing doesn’t work, no matter how you look at it. Such speech is poorly received. I wrote what I think. No offense.
I was just interested in learning things myself, but after the micro broke, I gave up 🙂
Either I was studying, or I was sorry for the money for him) But now the desire has completely disappeared.
